
2011年5月26日
Expressing an Opinion - 1
In 1999, after a group of collegians in Northwestern University vindicated another student's innocence, the matter triggered the discussion over the death penalty in America . Yet, I support that the penalty should exist for these reasons below. First of all, since some people may consider it brutal to deprive a person of his life even though he might be a criminal, I hold that it serves him right; in my view, a convict should think of the consequence just before he does something illegal, and once he does it, he has to shoulder the penalty instead of shirking the punishment against laws protecting human rights. Secondly, as long as the death penalty is abolished, the whole society must be in a state of chaos; those who commit crimes will never be afraid of the coming of the retribution. Also, I am of the opinion that if the death sentence exists, the public will definitely live in peace and happiness without worrying about the misfortune's happening to them. In light of all the points mentioned, it is undeniable that the existence of the death penalty is dominant to a certain extent.
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看不到錯誤 0.0
回覆刪除看完之後我只能給妳
回覆刪除三個英文字
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我喜歡你的開頭
有根據
符合桐城派的學說-考據
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以上~
those who commit crimes "will never be" afraid of the coming of the retribution.
回覆刪除這裡是不是要寫will be never
喜歡結論句+
回覆刪除錯誤,找不到。
一定要這樣
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我只是笨了一點嘛!!
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