2011年5月26日

Expressing an Opinion - 1

In 1999, after a group of collegians in Northwestern University vindicated another student's innocence, the matter triggered the discussion over the death penalty in America.  Yet, I support that the penalty should exist for these reasons below.  First of all, since some people may consider it brutal to deprive a person of his life even though he might be a criminal, I hold that it serves him right; in my view, a convict should think of the consequence just before he does something illegal, and once he does it, he has to shoulder the penalty instead of shirking the punishment against laws protecting human rights.  Secondly, as long as the death penalty is abolished, the whole society must be in a state of chaos; those who commit crimes will never be afraid of the coming of the retribution.  Also, I am of the opinion that if the death sentence exists, the public will definitely live in peace and happiness without worrying about the misfortune's happening to them.  In light of all the points mentioned, it is undeniable that the existence of the death penalty is dominant to a certain extent.

8 則留言:

  1. 寫的很好阿 我沒看到什麼錯誤~

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  2. 恩恩沒有錯欸(思
    神人!!(笑

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  3. 看完之後我只能給妳
    三個英文字
    wow~
    我喜歡你的開頭
    有根據
    符合桐城派的學說-考據
    XDDD

    以上~

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  4. those who commit crimes "will never be" afraid of the coming of the retribution.
    這裡是不是要寫will be never

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  5. 喜歡結論句+
    錯誤,找不到。

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  6. 一定要這樣
    刁難同學嗎??
    我只是笨了一點嘛!!

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