About three days ago, I went to Kaoshiung with my friend, called Julie, and unfortunately, she got lost as I was purchasing my dinner in the night market. What's worse, she didn't own a cell phone, which made it much more difficult for me to look for her. Hence, some directions are about to be presented now in order to find her. Firstly, I can tell you that she is one hundred and sixty centimeters tall or so, and she has long black hair reaching her waist; yet, she prefered to wear her hair in a ponytail. Also, she wore a pair of spectacles whose frames are lightyellow. Moreover, the fantastic dress whose placket was interlaced to the slategray and the ivory was what she was dressed in that day and she wore a pair of black beige boots. I remembered that she had a lavender bag on the shoulder; there are some animation patterns on it. If anyone sees a person who matches the information above, please inform me by the e-mail as soon as possible. Thanks a lot.
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﹡以下是一些顏色的翻譯:
lightyellow 淺黃色
slategray 石板灰色
ivory 象牙白
lavender 淡紫色(像薰衣草那種…)
Ⅰ、Firstly, I can tell you that she is one hundred and sixty centimeters tall or so, and she has long black hair reaching her waist;
回覆刪除Ⅱ、Also, she wore a pair of spectacles whose frames are lightyellow.
Ⅲ、there are some animation patterns on it.
請教一下。這三句需要用過去式嗎?
Hence, some directions are about to be presented now in order to find her.
不曉得有沒有不對之處;
但是如果沒有的話(!)
我可是很喜歡這個句型的。
(…啊,好像又沒給建議了…)
(所謂伊人,嗯
,我確認過絕對不是在下。)
(P.S.剛看到"she is one hundred..."的時候,
我還以為在說歲數--‥嚇到。)
描述的很詳細
回覆刪除whose placket was interlaced to the slategray and the ivory was what she was dressed
the ivory 前面的the是不是可以不用阿?
I remembered that she had a lavender bag on the shoulder這裡remember應該用現在是就可以了吧
回覆刪除其他於如都有說了
寫的很詳細呢
描寫的好詳細...
回覆刪除我寫的大概是你的三分之一吧??
相信你很快就會找到你朋友的~
挖賽這是在說妤如吧
回覆刪除被妳描述的很清楚:)
she prefered to wear her hair in a ponytail.
回覆刪除我覺得這是一個尋人啟示
所以應該不用說他喜歡怎麼樣吧
直接說她綁馬尾就好了吧!
這是我個人見解啦~
I remembered that she had a lavender bag on the shoulder
我覺得remembered用現在式比較好~
恩!!!好棒喔~~~~
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