Every humanity has unique characteristics, and yet, the two people, called Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman, have the very familiar ones. Firstly, I can see their eye color is the same and brown through the driver’s licenses. Secondly, on it I can also gain the information about that both of their hair is black. Next, Stephanie is as tall as Ann; they are five feet and three inches tall. To my surprise, even the date of their birthdays is identical, too. In short, such instance as the twain might be seen somewhere across the globe; perhaps there are still some people who are similar to other ones everywhere; in the long run, the earth seems to be infinite after all.
應該是沒什麼錯誤吧...
回覆刪除真棒
感覺你寫的文章都和其他人不太一樣..
我找不到錯誤
回覆刪除是因為我太笨嗎(淚目
改你的文章
真是有挑戰性阿@@
到底要怎麼找錯誤(汗
perhaps there are still some people who are similar with other ones everywhere
回覆刪除是不是similar to ?
^^
甘拜下風
回覆刪除你可以再變態一點呀!!!
on it I can also gain the information 應該改成on them哦因為有兩張
回覆刪除然後information about that好像有點奇怪
我覺得topic sentence寫得不錯~
恩...
回覆刪除((沉思ING
你....寫的是文言文吧!
現在提倡的白話文喔!
回到現代吧!
XDDD
((別打我
以上~
--沒看到要修改的地方。
回覆刪除--喜歡結論句的後半段。
沒什麼錯誤~
回覆刪除我有個問題,第一句那邊have the very familiar ones. 那ones是代表什麼意思?
回覆刪除最後,冠伶的文章都有種小說的感覺^_^