2011年4月28日

Comparing - 1

Every humanity has unique characteristics, and yet, the two people, called Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman, have the very familiar ones.  Firstly, I can see their eye color is the same and brown through the driver’s licenses.  Secondly, on it I can also gain the information about that both of their hair is black.  Next, Stephanie is as tall as Ann; they are five feet and three inches tall.  To my surprise, even the date of their birthdays is identical, too.  In short, such instance as the twain might be seen somewhere across the globe; perhaps there are still some people who are similar to other ones everywhere; in the long run, the earth seems to be infinite after all.

9 則留言:

  1. 應該是沒什麼錯誤吧...
    真棒
    感覺你寫的文章都和其他人不太一樣..

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  2. 我找不到錯誤
    是因為我太笨嗎(淚目

    改你的文章
    真是有挑戰性阿@@
    到底要怎麼找錯誤(汗

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  3. perhaps there are still some people who are similar with other ones everywhere
    是不是similar to ?
    ^^

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  4. 甘拜下風

    你可以再變態一點呀!!!

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  5. on it I can also gain the information 應該改成on them哦因為有兩張
    然後information about that好像有點奇怪
    我覺得topic sentence寫得不錯~

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  6. 恩...
    ((沉思ING
    你....寫的是文言文吧!
    現在提倡的白話文喔!
    回到現代吧!
    XDDD
    ((別打我

    以上~

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  7. --沒看到要修改的地方。

    --喜歡結論句的後半段。

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  8. 我有個問題,第一句那邊have the very familiar ones. 那ones是代表什麼意思?
    最後,冠伶的文章都有種小說的感覺^_^

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