Comparing the two dominant Americans, called Jolin Adams and Thomas Jefferson, you can find something identical to them. First of all, they both played an important role in American Revolution. Secondly, Jolin was a delegate to the Continental Congress and so was Thomas. Also, they both involved in Declaration of Independence, and assumed the signer and the author of it. Moreover, the twain who studied biography also studied and practiced law. Most unbelievable of all, they even died on the same day, July 4, 1826. In sum, these sagas above, which are absolutely worthy emulating myself on, are definitely remarkable; undeniably, they are veritably sages.
First of all, they both played an important role in American Revolution.
回覆刪除是不是要改成played important roles呀?
名字是John不是Jolin喔...
回覆刪除是不是看錯了(汗
the signer and the author of it.
其中一個人好像不是author喔
沒了(笑
看你的文章都要一直查字典 >"<
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我無話可說
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Comparing the two dominant Americans為什麼compare要用ing形式呢??
回覆刪除還有something identical to them好像有點奇怪耶you can find they have somethig identical to each other's會不會比較好一點?
worthy emulating是不是worth emulating呀?
我覺得寫得很通順~
they both played an important role in American Revolution.
回覆刪除裡的 an~role 我會刪掉"an",並在role後+S
and assumed the signer and the author of it.
裡的 signer 和 author 我會都+上S耶..
以上~
they both played "an important role" in American Revolution
回覆刪除這裡應該是複數吧!
you can find something identical to them.
回覆刪除在下總覺得＂to＂應該要換成＂between＂或者＂of＂。
不甚確定。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
我怎麼覺得我第一句就看不懂了(汗...
回覆刪除Comparing the two dominant Americans
為什麼要用comparing? (compare不是搭配to嗎)
然後dominant這形容詞是優秀的意思嗎?