Giving Reasons
Cynth, an excellent novelist from Taichung, launched her first novel composed of one hundred thousand words or so as she was a senior high school student, and became my favorite writer on reading her master piece. Undeniably, she was so outstanding that I could not help admiring her. Actually, if I could have an opportunity to interview her, I would ask her something about the writing skills and the amazing achievement. First of all, I’d ask her how she could have the perseverance to spend almost six years only to write a book. Next, I wondered how a senior high school student could write so well and the sentences were extremely fascinating. For I was also a Chinese novelist, I was eager to know methods to improve my writing techniques since she was definitely a perfect paragon what I could emulate myself. After the interview, I might take pictures with her and set them on my desk; hence, whenever I wrote, I would recall her so that I could regain stamina and persevered. Yet, she devoted herself to Cynthiaism, which originally meant the goddess, Diana, in Rome and a bard, called Propertius, often named the main characters in love poets Cynthia; in sum, I was convinced that I would absolutely be more romantic in writing after the interview.
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﹡以下是可能查不到或看不懂的翻譯:
﹡Cynthiaism 欣西亞主義
Cynth, ..., and became my favorite writer on reading her master piece.
回覆刪除我不太確定"on reading ~"那裡的用法;
"on reading"的主詞,整句看起來似乎是Cynth,
可是妳想說的是自己吧!還是我誤解了?
"master piece"要連在一起吧。
For I was ... since she was definitely a perfect paragon what I could emulate myself.
我覺得"what"要改成"that"。
請教一下。"myself"後面需要加"to"或"after"嗎?
喜歡"Cynthiaism"這個字,
感覺很優雅。
如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。
master piece 應該是連起來的吧
回覆刪除其他沒什麼問題吧 很厲害~~
I would recall her so that I could regain stamina and persevered這裡could後面perssevered是不適用原形就好了阿?
回覆刪除寫的很不錯
masterpiece可以分開嗎?我不太清楚。
回覆刪除然後你的文章好深奧阿...
hence, whenever I wrote, I would recall her so that I could regain stamina and persevered.
回覆刪除這裡的persevered是不是不用+d?
master piece.
回覆刪除連在一起
沒有什麼問題^^
became my favorite writer on reading her master piece.
回覆刪除裡的master piece沒有分開喔!
以上~
辛苦了!
masterpiece是這樣喔~~~~
回覆刪除終於找到一個錯誤(汗