Contrasting - 2 - Revised

In an employer's shoes, choosing a person from the twain may be a bit difficult; yet, were I the boss, I might select Debra as my employee.  Firstly, Debra had education in BA English, a McGill university from 1993 to 1997, then a year later or so, she was in MA English, a university from Toronto; besides she studied in a college of Pennsylvania, PhD Linguistics, in 2000.  On the other hand, Lynn had education in BA Spanish, which is a New York university; that is, Debra has more education than Lynn.  Secondly, now I need an English instructor; hence, the one I hire must own some kind of experience, since Debra had been an instructor on Intensive English Program in a university of Vermont just like Lynn, who had been an English instructor in Tokyo Girls High School, Debra had more additional experience, such as a consultant and author, a teaching assistant, a server and whatnot.  Though Lynn had won Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, Debra had delivered plenty of public prints.  With these wherefores above, I am of the opinion that Debra is going to become one of my personnel undeniably.