Discussing causes - 2 - Revised

It is not always easy for a person to run his or her own business; one can fail if he or she is not careful enough in plenty of ways, and Michael Williams is no exception.  He was a person who opened a small music store on September 5, and went into the bankrupt on December 19.  Several components of the store will be analyzed now in order to find out what led to his failure.  To begin with, the CDs he sold were only hip-hop and rock; compared with the two large music stores in a shopping center, William's store was eclipsed, and that was the main wherefore of his failure.  Secondly, Mr. William's shop was opened Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 since it was reported that the available time of the inhabitants there didn't match the time his store opened; it might be a cause, too.  Furthermore, he wouldn't accept checks or credit cards; that is, he accepted cash only.  That might be bothersome for purchasers to pay their bills, and was likely to send his customers away.  Also, the residents there tended to be aging population, and the CD types William sold wouldn't meet their needs exactly.  In the long run, these points above were the possible wherefores that caused the collapse of Michael William's business, and they would absolutely be mirrors for those who intended to run their own business.