2011年6月2日

Discussing Cause - 2

It is not always easy for a person to run his or her own business; one can fail if he or she is not careful enough in plenty of ways, and Michael Williams is no exception.  He was a person who opened a small music store on September 5, and went into the bankrupt on December 19.  Several components of the store will be analyzed now in order to find out what led to his failure.  To begin with, the CDs he sold were only hip-hop and rock; compared with the two large music stores in a shopping center, William's store was eclipsed, and that was the main wherefore of his failure.  Secondly, Mr. William's shop was opened Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 since it was reported that the available time of the inhabitants there didn't match the time his store opened; it might be a cause, too.  Furthermore, he wouldn't accept checks or credit cards; that is, he accepted cash only.  That might be bothersome for purchasers to pay their bills, and was likely to send his customers away.  Also, the residents there tended to be aging population, and the CD types William sold wouldn't meet their needs exactly.  In the long run, these points above were the possible wherefores that caused the collapse of Michael William's business, and they would absolutely be mirrors for those who intended to run their own business.

7 則留言:

  1. 寫得很好哦~
    沒看到錯誤

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  2. Secondly, Mr. William's shop was opened ... since it was reported that ...; it might be a cause, too.
    請問一下,言下之意是
    "他的店從星期一至五下午一點開到五點,因為(?)據報導,在地居民的空閒時間不符合其營業時段;這也是一個原因"?
    這樣一來,翻譯似乎怪怪的;以上純屬個人意見。

    好像在雞蛋裡挑骨頭……

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  3. 沒甚麼錯誤
    只是.....好長喔!!

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