Several decades ago, some scientists perceived that global warming, mainly caused by carbon dioxide and usually leading to high temperature, had come into being; notwithstanding the hint, they denied the reminder and still devastated the earth, causing the "global warming" to turn into the "global warning." Yet, at that time, most people considered it an insignificancy and missed the best time to rescue our globe which was asking for help. Hence, its impacts on our lives deteriorate now and we should do something to salvage our precious earth. At the beginning, global warming will lead to awful climate; for instance, high temperature may result in the widespread tropical infections that can make several inhabitants fall ill and even die. Secondly, it may precipitate the propagation of animals or vegetation; consequently, the biodiversity is going to be threatened as well. Moreover, the high temperature not only accelerates the desertification but makes it possible to expend unscrupulously. In addition, global warming conjures images of rising seas; thus, some islands will be threatened that they may be submerged. As a result, as the "global warming" turns into the "global warning", we cannot neglect it anymore just because its effects on our lives are definitely self-evident.
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回覆刪除我覺得這篇的句子寫的很好
好強喔!!!!!!
回覆刪除global warning真是個好詞XD
回覆刪除冠玲好可愛XD
回覆刪除打字打到變烏龜XDXDXD~
好棒~
喔哇哇~
回覆刪除好厲害喔!
完全佩服
以上~
真的寫得很好呢!!!
回覆刪除用詞精闢(笑)
Moreover, the high temperature not only ...but makes it possible to expend unscrupulously.
回覆刪除請問一下"expend"是否為筆誤?
閣下是否意用"expand"?
僅此一問,其餘無誤。
話說之前在課堂上看您的文章,
(討論主題句時)
無明顯感受;直到要給回覆--
才發現妳的主題句真的好˙長˙喔。
幾乎是文章的二分之一了嘛(計算過)
感覺就是--想說終於到一半了,
結果驚覺文章方剛開始(!!)
…讓在下清醒不少。
it possible to "expend" unscrupulously.
回覆刪除是要打expand嗎
論點充足
回覆刪除讚啦!!!!
給妤如:
回覆刪除哪來2分之1= =+
明明是三分之一…不要攻擊同學ˊˋ