2011年6月9日

Discussing Effects - 2

Opening a large factory may be somewhat difficult, for plenty of opposite effects will be primary issues in the country or perhaps in the local community.  When it comes to the positive ones, it is undeniable that more jobs will be provided and less the unemployed are going to be seen.  Having a stable salary, the gap between the rich and the poor in the same country will be narrowed; hence, the economy of the city may develop.  On the other hand, abundant pollution is another effect, such as water pollution, air pollution, and noise pollution.  Take water pollution for instance, the vegetables or some fruits we have may be tainted; our health will collapse due to the fatal contamination.  Since Acton is a safe, quiet, and clean place, which is just like Arcadia, even little pollution will destroy its nature beauty, and that's why some people concerned about this negative effect.  In the long run, with the consequences of opening a factory, the incident influences should be absolutely paid attention to without a doubt.

9 則留言:

  1. 寫得很好耶
    我念得很開心(什麼鬼)
    不過很像論說文(汗)

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  2. the unemployed are going to be seen.
    不懂句意。

    our health will collapse...
    常見用法為"our health system will collapse"
    但在下不知有無違背原意。

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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  3. less the unemployed are going to be seen這具是什麼意思?
    其他都不錯~

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  4. 有些地方不是描述得很清楚
    不過
    其他很棒

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  5. less the unemployed are going to be seen.
    這是說看到更少的失業者嗎?
    失業者如果可數前面用應該用fewer
    如果不可數後面是不是要用is goning to

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