Autobiography Final

Family Background

My name is Chen, Guan-Ling.    As my mother's only daughter, I am a bit quiet.  For I was born in a single parent family, I lived in Grandmother’s house for my childhood.  Yet, my mother worked on her own to raise me; as a result, she didn’t have enough time to accompany me; then, I was taken care of by my aunt. 
My aunt was a strict person; hence, I was asked to be a person with dignity.  Notwithstanding her rigor, she wouldn’t oppress me.  As a little girl, I was always afraid of making mistakes, for I thought I would definitely be scolded after she perceived my fault; to my surprise, she didn’t just blame me for what I did; instead, she taught me something meaningful.  That is, it’s well-mannered that a person should apologize when doing something wrong.  Also, as the person receives someone’s aid, he or she must say thank you to whoever assists him or her.  Though I felt awkward at first, now I won’t feel uncomfortable any more.  Fortunately, now I am courteous to everyone under such instruction.

School Life

     I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS).  When I was a junior high school student, I was confident of my English ability, and yet, my mindset had changed a lot since I turned into a senior high school student.  As a high school student, I learned that the more I study, the better I will realize how much I still leave to be desired.  As a consequence, I did my utmost to be a studious learner, and examined my English ability in several tests, such as General English Proficiency Test (GEPT) for the intermediate level, Level 2 of the test of English ability Association, and an online oral contest called my English Tutor (my ET), etc.

     Apart from the certificates I attained, what I had learned from the tests was also important.  Actually, not only my English reading ability was improved to some extent, but I also learned a lot of experience of test skills.  Moreover, my oral speaking ability in English was improving through my ET as well.  Nevertheless, in addition to my ET, the listening and speaking course at school once every week is also a good opportunity to help me master speaking English.  With various chances to practice speaking English to everyone onstage, I also have the guts to talk over everything with my peers now.

     As for clubs, I have been in the school novel writing and studying club since I was a freshman.  For my interest in writing and reading novel, I have never changed my club since then.  Partaking in this club not only helped me keep in touch with popular novels, but I can also compose my works and discussed them with the associators of the club.  What’s more, I even issued my novel on club’s publications; that was such a special experience that I would never let it slip my mind.

Self-Evaluation

     Since I was in junior high school, I have fostered my interest in writing novel with my peers; my writing style turned from whodunits to romances and finally I wrote fantasy novels.  Though I felt bushed as my first composing, yet I don’t have this kind of feeling now since I have embarked on them for four years or so.  When I was composing, I’d immerse myself in the plot and the characters I created.  Nonetheless, that was not only the attitude I held toward composing, but it was my attitude toward everything I did and studying alike.  What’s more, as I set a high standard for myself, I’ll modify my works once and once again.  Perhaps that’s some kind of expression of my personal traits; I do almost everything in this way.

     Also, in the meanwhile, I developed my interest in drawing pictures on computer, and I liked design as well.  I even set a blog to post the pictures I designed; yet, I faced some obstacles.  That is, I found a person copying my design concept.  Frankly speaking, I felt extremely angry as I saw that, but after several days’ thinking, I realized that the person could steal my photos, but she couldn’t embezzle the concept; she would just be a copycat for good.  Telling it to myself, I felt much better.  From this experience, I have learned something about my mindset.

     Well goes a saying that if you don’t like something, change it; if you can’t change it, change your attitude.  From that moment on, I know that the world will be thoroughly different as long as I hold different attitude toward it.

Future Perspectives

     In the near future, I’ll choose English as my major in college.  The reason is not as skin deep as that I had spent lots of time on English.  Instead, that is because of my interest in English.  I’m convinced that learning what I’m in favor of is the best and efficient way to improve it even though it is still so far for me to master English.  What I am confident of is not the progress that will certainly be made if I can be admitted to your university, but the effort I’ll definitely make in the future.

     For me, the most important thing is my mindset and I am absolutely able to attain whatever goal I set up as long as I hold the creed that “If you don’t like something, change it; if you can’t change it, change your attitude.”  Perhaps there are still so many challenges in my way that I cannot foresee; I will be well-prepared and positive about them at all time.  After all, attitude is everything.

Conclusion

With the creed I hold, I'm convinced that I will definitely make progress in every aspect of English.  In the long run, I hope I can be given a chance to prove that I can make it.

Future Perspectives - Revised

     In the near future, I’ll choose English as my major in college.  The reason is not as skin deep as that I had spent lots of time on English.  Instead, that is because of my interest in English.  I’m convinced that learning what I’m in favor of is the best and efficient way to improve it even though it is still so far for me to master English.  What I am confident of is not the progress that will certainly be made if I can be admitted to your university, but the effort I’ll definitely make in the future.

     For me, the most important thing is my mindset and I am absolutely able to attain whatever goal I set up as long as I hold the creed that “If you don’t like something, change it; if you can’t change it, change your attitude.”  Perhaps there are still so many challenges in my way that I cannot foresee; I will be well-prepared and positive about them at all time.  After all, attitude is everything.

Self-Evaluation - Revised

     Since I was in junior high school, I have fostered my interest in writing novel with my peers; my writing style turned from whodunits to romances and finally I wrote fantasy novels.  Though I felt bushed as my first composing, yet I don’t have this kind of feeling now since I have embarked on them for four years or so.  When I was composing, I’d immerse myself in the plot and the characters I created.  Nonetheless, that was not only the attitude I held toward composing, but it was my attitude toward everything I did and studying alike.  What’s more, as I set a high standard for myself, I’ll modify my works once and once again.  Perhaps that’s some kind of expression of my personal traits; I do almost everything in this way.

     Also, in the meanwhile, I developed my interest in drawing pictures on computer, and I liked design as well.  I even set a blog to post the pictures I designed; yet, I faced some obstacles.  That is, I found a person copying my design concept.  Frankly speaking, I felt extremely angry as I saw that, but after several days’ thinking, I realized that the person could steal my photos, but she couldn’t embezzle the concept; she would just be a copycat for good.  Telling it to myself, I felt much better.  From this experience, I have learned something about my mindset.

     Well goes a saying that if you don’t like something, change it; if you can’t change it, change your attitude.  From that moment on, I know that the world will be thoroughly different as long as I hold different attitude toward it.

Future Perspectives

     In the near future, I’ll choose English as my major in college.  The reason is not as skin deep as that I had spent lots of time on English.  Instead, that is because of my interest in English.  I’m convinced that learning what I’m in favor of is the best and efficient way to improve it even though it is still so far for me to master English.  What I am confident of is not the progress that will certainly be made if I can be admitted to your university, but the effort I’ll definitely make in the future.

     For me, the most important thing is my mindset and I am absolutely able to attain whatever goal I set up as long as I hold the creed that “If you don’t like something, change it; if you can’t change it, change your attitude.”  Perhaps there are still so many challenges in my way that I cannot foresee; I will be well-prepared and positive about them at all time.  After all, attitude is everything.

Self-Evaluation

     Since I was in junior high school, I have fostered my interest in writing novel with my peers; my writing style turned from whodunits to romances and finally I wrote fantasy novels.  Though I felt bushed as my first composing, yet I don’t have this kind of feeling now since I have embarked on them for four years or so.  When I was composing, I’d immerse myself in the plot and the characters I created.  Nonetheless, that was not only the attitude I held toward composing, but it was my attitude toward everything I did and studying alike.  What’s more, as I set a high standard for myself, I’ll modify my works once and once again.  Perhaps that’s some kind of expression of my personal traits; I do almost everything in this way.

     Also, in the meanwhile, I developed my interest in drawing pictures on computer, and I liked design as well.  I even set a blog to post the pictures I designed; yet, I faced some obstacles.  That is, I found a person copying my design concept.  Frankly speaking, I felt extremely angry as I saw that, but after several days’ thinking, I realized that the person could steal my photos, but she couldn’t embezzle the concept; she would just be a copycat for good.  Telling it to myself, I felt much better.  From this experience, I have learned something about my mindset.

     Well goes a saying that if you don’t like something, change it; if you can’t change it, change your attitude.  From that moment on, I know that the world will be thoroughly different as long as I hold different attitude toward it.

School Life - Revised

     I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS).  When I was a junior high school student, I was confident of my English ability, and yet, my mindset had changed a lot since I turned into a senior high school student.  As a high school student, I learned that the more I study, the better I will realize how much I still leave to be desired.  As a consequence, I did my utmost to be a studious learner, and examined my English ability in several tests, such as General English Proficiency Test (GEPT) for the intermediate level, Level 2 of the test of English ability Association, and an online oral contest called my English Tutor (my ET), etc.

     Apart from the certificates I attained, what I had learned from the tests was also important.  Actually, not only my English reading ability was improved to some extent, but I also learned a lot of experience of test skills.  Moreover, my oral speaking ability in English was improving through my ET as well.  Nevertheless, in addition to my ET, the listening and speaking course at school once every week is also a good opportunity to help me master speaking English.  With various chances to practice speaking English to everyone onstage, I also have the guts to talk over everything with my peers now.

     As for clubs, I have been in the school novel writing and studying club since I was a freshman.  For my interest in writing and reading novel, I have never changed my club since then.  Partaking in this club not only helped me keep in touch with popular novels, but I can also compose my works and discussed them with the associators of the club.  What’s more, I even issued my novel on club’s publications; that was such a special experience that I would never let it slip my mind.

Family Background - Revised

My name is Chen, Guan-Ling.    As my mother's only daughter, I am a bit quiet.  For I was born in a single parent family, I lived in Grandmother’s house for my childhood.  Yet, my mother worked on her own to raise me; as a result, she didn’t have enough time to accompany me; then, I was taken care of by my aunt. 
My aunt was a strict person; hence, I was asked to be a person with dignity.  Notwithstanding her rigor, she wouldn’t oppress me.  As a little girl, I was always afraid of making mistakes, for I thought I would definitely be scolded after she perceived my fault; to my surprise, she didn’t just blame me for what I did; instead, she taught me something meaningful.  That is, it’s well-mannered that a person should apologize when doing something wrong.  Also, as the person receives someone’s aid, he or she must say thank you to whoever assists him or her.  Though I felt awkward at first, now I won’t feel uncomfortable any more.  Fortunately, now I am courteous to everyone under such instruction.

School Life

     I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS).  When I was a junior high school student, I was confident of my English ability, and yet, my mindset had changed a lot since I turned into a senior high school student.  As a high school student, I learned that the more I study, the better I will realize how much I still leave to be desired.  As a consequence, I did my utmost to be a studious learner, and examined my English ability in several tests, such as General English Proficiency Test (GEPT) for the intermediate level, Level 2 of the test of English ability Association, and an online oral contest called my English Tutor (my ET), etc.

     Apart from the certificates I attained, what I had learned from the tests was also important.  Actually, not only my English reading ability was improved to some extent, but I also learned a lot of experience of test skills.  Moreover, my oral speaking ability in English was improving through my ET as well.  Nevertheless, in addition to my ET, the listening and speaking course at school once every week is also a good opportunity to help me master speaking English.  With various chances to practice speaking English to everyone onstage, I also have the guts to talk over everything with my peers now.

     As for clubs, I have been in the school novel writing and studying club since I was a freshman.  For my interest in writing and reading novel, I have never changed my club since then.  Partaking in this club not only helped me keep in touch with popular novels, but I can also compose my works and discussed them with the associators of the club.  What’s more, I even issued my novel on club’s publications; that was such a special experience that I would never let it slip my mind.

Family Background

My name is Chen, Guan-Ling.    As my mother's only daughter, I am a bit quiet.  For I was born in a single parent family, I lived in Grandmother’s house for my childhood.  Yet, my mother worked on her own to raise me; as a result, she didn’t have enough time to accompany me; then, I was taken care of by my aunt. 
My aunt was a strict person; hence, I was asked to be a person with dignity.  Notwithstanding her rigor, she wouldn’t oppress me.  As a little girl, I was always afraid of making mistakes, for I thought I would definitely be scolded after she perceived my fault; to my surprise, she didn’t just blame me for what I did; instead, she taught me something meaningful.  That is, it’s well-mannered that a person should apologize when doing something wrong.  Also, as the person receives someone’s aid, he or she must say thank you to whomever assists him or her.  Though I felt awkward at first, now I won’t feel uncomfortable any more.  Fortunately, now I am courteous to everyone under such instruction.

Autobiography_Sample - 2

I am Toa. My English name is Angela. I am 17 years old. I am from Taipei First Girls’ High School. I come from a well-to-do family. My mother passed away when I was in my first junior high year. My father is a computer engineer who remarried again three years ago. My grandparents live with us as well. My family manages to get along pretty well.

Throughout my school years, my academic results have always been pretty good expected in second half of first year and first half of the second year, because my mother’s death was such an anguish to me. It took me more than a year to get better. My father was afraid that I would turn bad after that. So he encouraged me to join many extra-curriculum activities. He sent me to piano class, ballet class and art class.
His purpose was to see that through music and art, I would find a way to let my pain go so that my heart would be comforted and my pain would ease away. I am very grateful to my father’s caring and thoughtful consideration. Since then music has been my spiritual guide, gradually becoming my most intimate companion.

In my high school years, I have taken any chance to participate in school activities. I join the chorus and jazz club, and participate in plenty of contests and performing for many occasions. We have won many contests and had been invited by city mayor to perform in the city hall. I am also the, member of art club, I enjoy sketch and painting very much.
Every time when I have chance I would go to Music Theater to listen to symphony and orchestra performance. There’s not once I would not be moved by the music. I really admire those musicians’ talent, passion and dedication to music. I wish one day I would be able to become one of them, performing on the stage and touring around the world. That’s my passion and expectation to myself, wish you would give me a chance to fulfill it.

Autobiography_Sample - 1

I am Lin. Sophia is my English name. I am 18 years old, studying in a public girls’ high school. I come from a very happy middle class family. My father works in a bank and my mother works in a bookstore. I am not the so-called spoiled child. My parents make very sure of that by training me to be independent.

Throughout my academic career I have not only gotten good grades but also been very active on sport field and have involved in various societies. I play volleyball and enjoy the team spirit we have. I have joined the drama club and participated in many English speech contests. I really enjoy participating in school activities. I not only made many friends, but also gained many different valuable experiences.

I have been the class English tutor for almost three years. I like to discuss and share the experience of learning English with people a lot. We often read “China Post” and ”Time Magazine” and discuss the content, the word usage and practice speaking English by discussing the articles we have read. At the beginning we found it was quiet hard because we could rarely understand the content but we encouraged each other not to give up. Gradually we had made improvement, we were so excited by it that the group discussion of English books and magazines became one of the most enjoyable things for us every week. I have won the first prize of school English speech contest in second year of high school and many of my English speech contests in my second year of high school and many of my English articles were put on “Students Post.”

My fondness for English is developed from my childhood. It’s lonely to be the only child. I had no one to play with when I was a kid. My mom knew this so she took me with her all the time. Hence bookstores became my playground and books have been my playmates since I was young. My mom would show me those fancy books with cute illustrations on it. Firstly I was drawn by the pictures and then I was curious about these strange symbols called words. That was my first contact with English. As I was interested what those symbol meant, my parents taught me a bit. As they felt that I was eager to learn, they found me an English tutor. Thanks to my parents got the advantage of learning English by starting it at really early age.

My interest in English brought me to the world of English literature. I have been enchanted by this creative world since then, so I decide to major in English literature. My aim is to explore the world of literature and the world of great writers, to open my eyes and cultivate my mind through this great world of literature.

Besides English literature, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I love reading, Writing, music and movies. I have my active side as well, I enjoy swimming, hiking, raveling and going to the nature a lot. I believe we must have balance in our lives, As to my personality. I am creative, optimistic, determined, willing to help others and down to earth.
I want to be one of the literature students who have the privilege of studying great writers’ work and exploring their inner world, their outlook of life and their role as learned scholars and their influence on the world. I can also do little contribution to awaking the awareness of culture and literature in our society since its importance has been neglected by us.

Best of the semester - 3

Several decades ago, some scientists perceived that global warming, mainly caused by carbon dioxide and usually leading to high temperature, had come into being; notwithstanding the hint, they denied the reminder and still devastated the earth, causing the "global warming" to turn into the "global warning."  Yet, at that time, most people considered it an insignificancy and missed the best time to rescue our globe which was asking for help.  Hence, its impacts on our lives deteriorate now and we should do something to salvage our precious earth.  At the beginning, global warming will lead to awful climate; for instance, high temperature may result in the widespread tropical infections that can make several inhabitants fall ill and even decease.  Secondly, it may precipitate the propagation of animals or vegetation; consequently, the biodiversity is going to be threatened as well.  Moreover, the high temperature not only accelerates the desertification but makes it possible to expand unscrupulously.  In addition, global warming conjures images of rising seas; thus, some islands will be threatened that they may be submerged.  As a result, as the "global warming" turns into the "global warning", we cannot neglect it anymore just because its effects on our lives are definitely self-evident.

Best of the semester - 2

In 1999, after a group of collegians in Northwestern University vindicated another student's innocence, the matter triggered the discussion over the death penalty in America.  Yet, I support that the penalty should exist for these wherefores below.  First of all, since some people may consider it brutal to deprive a person of his life even though he might be a criminal, I hold that it serves him right; in my view, a convict should think of the consequence just before he does something illegal, and once he does it, he has to shoulder the penalty instead of shirking the punishment against laws protecting human rights.  Secondly, as long as the death penalty is abolished, the whole society must be in a state of chaos; those who commit crimes will never be afraid of the coming of the retribution.  Also, I am of the opinion that if the death sentence exists, the public will definitely live in peace and happiness without worrying about the misfortune's happening to them.  In light of all the points mentioned, it is undeniable that the existence of the death penalty is dominant to a certain extent.

Best of the semester - 1

On a Saturday morning, a genial sunbeam brightened my hair as well as my black patent leather bag to vividness; I thought it would certainly be a nice day for me.  As I was rambling around the railway station to wait for my cousin, I met an old lady, whose hair was a little messy, peddling tissue paper along the street in a hoarse voice.  However, plenty of people passed by the granny, but no one intended to halt.  I watched all the comings and goings.  Afterward, I stayed beside her; she looked at me appreciatively.  After a few talks, I knew that she had lived alone for several years, and that she had to support herself even though the painstaking livelihood had tortured her for long.  Hence, I decided to buy all the tissue paper she sold, and wanted her to return home for a rest.  To my surprise, she smiled broadly at me, and she said that I was such a nice person who was willing to help an old lady.  On seeing her satisfaction expressed on her face, I was infatuated in the sparkling smile.  At that moment, I realized the essence of unforgettable memory lay in achieving the real happiness of the inner life.

Discussing Effects - 2 - Revised

Opening a large factory may be somewhat difficult, for plenty of opposite effects will be primary issues in the country or perhaps in the local community.  When it comes to the positive ones, it is undeniable that more jobs will be provided and fewer the unemployed are going to be seen.  Having a stable salary, the gap between the rich and the poor in the same country will be narrowed; hence, the economy of the city may develop.  On the other hand, abundant pollution is another effect, such as water pollution, air pollution, and noise pollution.  Take water pollution for instance, the vegetables or some fruits we have may be tainted; our health system will collapse due to the fatal contamination.  Since Acton is a safe, quiet, and clean place, which is just like Arcadia, even little pollution will destroy its nature beauty, and that's why some people concerned about this negative effect.  In the long run, with the consequences of opening a factory, the incident influences should be absolutely paid attention to without a doubt.

Discussing Effects - 1 - Revised

Several decades ago, some scientists perceived that global warming, mainly caused by carbon dioxide and usually leading to high temperature, had come into being; notwithstanding the hint, they denied the reminder and still devastated the earth, causing the "global warming" to turn into the "global warning."  Yet, at that time, most people considered it an insignificancy and missed the best time to rescue our globe which was asking for help.  Hence, its impacts on our lives deteriorate now and we should do something to salvage our precious earth.  At the beginning, global warming will lead to awful climate; for instance, high temperature may result in the widespread tropical infections that can make several inhabitants fall ill and even die.  Secondly, it may precipitate the propagation of animals or vegetation; consequently, the biodiversity is going to be threatened as well.  Moreover, the high temperature not only accelerates the desertification but makes it possible to expand unscrupulously.  In addition, global warming conjures images of rising seas; thus, some islands will be threatened that they may be submerged.  As a result, as the "global warming" turns into the "global warning", we cannot neglect it anymore just because its effects on our lives are definitely self-evident.

Discussing causes - 2 - Revised

It is not always easy for a person to run his or her own business; one can fail if he or she is not careful enough in plenty of ways, and Michael Williams is no exception.  He was a person who opened a small music store on September 5, and went into the bankrupt on December 19.  Several components of the store will be analyzed now in order to find out what led to his failure.  To begin with, the CDs he sold were only hip-hop and rock; compared with the two large music stores in a shopping center, William's store was eclipsed, and that was the main wherefore of his failure.  Secondly, Mr. William's shop was opened Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 since it was reported that the available time of the inhabitants there didn't match the time his store opened; it might be a cause, too.  Furthermore, he wouldn't accept checks or credit cards; that is, he accepted cash only.  That might be bothersome for purchasers to pay their bills, and was likely to send his customers away.  Also, the residents there tended to be aging population, and the CD types William sold wouldn't meet their needs exactly.  In the long run, these points above were the possible wherefores that caused the collapse of Michael William's business, and they would absolutely be mirrors for those who intended to run their own business.

Discussing causes - 1 - Revised

When it comes to physical condition, a normal teenager should be healthy theoretically, and yet, I was once the exception as I was a junior high school pupil.  In the student medical checkup, I was diagnosed with scoliosis; hence, I had to make a decision if I should undergo an operation or not.  On hearing the awful news, I just couldn't imagine it initially; however, what I had to do was not hesitate but determine as soon as I could because procrastination might make the situation worsen.  Actually, I didn't face the truth at first, and even sought another way to cure my illness, which caused ghastly deterioration.  After all, I was so young that undergoing an operation was definitely dreadful.  However, at the prospect of operation, I wanted to flee, and yet, I started to think about it and accepted it ultimately, for my illness wouldn't improve if I kept evading.  As a result, I couldn't help but undergo a spinal surgery as I was a fifteen-year-old teenager.  During the seven days in the hospital, I felt extremely torturous as I couldn't sleep well; notwithstanding the terrible ache in my spine, I got it over.  After I was released from the hospital, I felt the unprecedented relief on thinking about what decision I had made which led to the improvement of my spinal disease.  From then on, I wouldn't have to worry about the terrible consequences of my uncommon illness.

Expressing an opinion - 2 -Revised

As collegians, people don't have to wear uniforms; instead, they wear whatever they are in favor of.  For my part, I think it is nice to wear a uniform due to several wherefores.  First, people who are in uniforms look neat and regulated.  Second, they are also the symbols of one's spirit and impression. Moreover, as they have an outing, it would be much more visible in a heavy crowd.  In addition, some uniforms are smashing since they are customized and ingenious.  In the long run, the practice of wearing a uniform is absolutely an excellent system without a doubt.

Expressing an opinion - 1 - Revised

In 1999, after a group of collegians in Northwestern University vindicated another student's innocence, the matter triggered the discussion over the death penalty in America.  Yet, I support that the penalty should exist for these reasons below.  First of all, since some people may consider it brutal to deprive a person of his life even though he might be a criminal, I hold that it serves him right; in my view, a convict should think of the consequence just before he does something illegal, and once he does it, he has to shoulder the penalty instead of shirking the punishment against laws protecting human rights.  Secondly, as long as the death penalty is abolished, the whole society must be in a state of chaos; those who commit crimes will never be afraid of the coming of the retribution.  Also, I am of the opinion that if the death sentence exists, the public will definitely live in peace and happiness without worrying about the misfortune's happening to them.  In light of all the points mentioned, it is undeniable that the existence of the death penalty is dominant to a certain extent.

Discussing Effects - 2

Opening a large factory may be somewhat difficult, for plenty of opposite effects will be primary issues in the country or perhaps in the local community.  When it comes to the positive ones, it is undeniable that more jobs will be provided and less the unemployed are going to be seen.  Having a stable salary, the gap between the rich and the poor in the same country will be narrowed; hence, the economy of the city may develop.  On the other hand, abundant pollution is another effect, such as water pollution, air pollution, and noise pollution.  Take water pollution for instance, the vegetables or some fruits we have may be tainted; our health will collapse due to the fatal contamination.  Since Acton is a safe, quiet, and clean place, which is just like Arcadia, even little pollution will destroy its nature beauty, and that's why some people concerned about this negative effect.  In the long run, with the consequences of opening a factory, the incident influences should be absolutely paid attention to without a doubt.

Discussing Effects - 1

Several decades ago, some scientists perceived that global warming, mainly caused by carbon dioxide and usually leading to high temperature, had come into being; notwithstanding the hint, they denied the reminder and still devastated the earth, causing the "global warming" to turn into the "global warning."  Yet, at that time, most people considered it an insignificancy and missed the best time to rescue our globe which was asking for help.  Hence, its impacts on our lives deteriorate now and we should do something to salvage our precious earth.  At the beginning, global warming will lead to awful climate; for instance, high temperature may result in the widespread tropical infections that can make several inhabitants fall ill and even die.  Secondly, it may precipitate the propagation of animals or vegetation; consequently, the biodiversity is going to be threatened as well.  Moreover, the high temperature not only accelerates the desertification but makes it possible to expend unscrupulously.  In addition, global warming conjures images of rising seas; thus, some islands will be threatened that they may be submerged.  As a result, as the "global warming" turns into the "global warning", we cannot neglect it anymore just because its effects on our lives are definitely self-evident.

Contrasting - 2 - Revised

In an employer's shoes, choosing a person from the twain may be a bit difficult; yet, were I the boss, I might select Debra as my employee.  Firstly, Debra had education in BA English, a McGill university from 1993 to 1997, then a year later or so, she was in MA English, a university from Toronto; besides she studied in a college of Pennsylvania, PhD Linguistics, in 2000.  On the other hand, Lynn had education in BA Spanish, which is a New York university; that is, Debra has more education than Lynn.  Secondly, now I need an English instructor; hence, the one I hire must own some kind of experience, since Debra had been an instructor on Intensive English Program in a university of Vermont just like Lynn, who had been an English instructor in Tokyo Girls High School, Debra had more additional experience, such as a consultant and author, a teaching assistant, a server and whatnot.  Though Lynn had won Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, Debra had delivered plenty of public prints.  With these wherefores above, I am of the opinion that Debra is going to become one of my personnel undeniably.

Comparing - 3 - Revised

I initially confused my Chinese teacher, Selena, in senior high school with my math teacher, Mickey, who taught me as I was just a pupil in junior high school in my cram school.  Plenty of resemblances to the twain will be presented now so that you will know why I used to regard them as the very identical ones.   First of all, they were both smashing; their excellent exteriors attracted me at first sight.  Secondly, Selena taught me so hard that she replenished what was not in the textbook, and likewise, Mickey did the same thing; she always provided me hordes of extra handouts to practice so that my math would improve after I did them.  Also, Mickey always spoke in a soft accent, which was similar to Selena did; having their courses was just like basking myself in a classical music concert.  Moreover, the mien Selena had was imperishable; hence, all scholars not only in my class but in other classes showed respect to her.  Yet, Mickey also had the same one so the students in the cram school like her so much.  In a word, the similarities they had were so wondrous, and it shouldn't be a surprise that I used to confuse them oftentimes.

Discussing Cause - 2

It is not always easy for a person to run his or her own business; one can fail if he or she is not careful enough in plenty of ways, and Michael Williams is no exception.  He was a person who opened a small music store on September 5, and went into the bankrupt on December 19.  Several components of the store will be analyzed now in order to find out what led to his failure.  To begin with, the CDs he sold were only hip-hop and rock; compared with the two large music stores in a shopping center, William's store was eclipsed, and that was the main wherefore of his failure.  Secondly, Mr. William's shop was opened Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 since it was reported that the available time of the inhabitants there didn't match the time his store opened; it might be a cause, too.  Furthermore, he wouldn't accept checks or credit cards; that is, he accepted cash only.  That might be bothersome for purchasers to pay their bills, and was likely to send his customers away.  Also, the residents there tended to be aging population, and the CD types William sold wouldn't meet their needs exactly.  In the long run, these points above were the possible wherefores that caused the collapse of Michael William's business, and they would absolutely be mirrors for those who intended to run their own business.

Discussing Cause - 1

When it comes to physical condition, a normal teenager should be healthy theoretically, and yet, I was once the exception as I was a junior high school pupil.  In the student medical checkup, I was diagnosed with scoliosis; hence, I had to make a decision if I should undergo an operation or not.  On hearing the awful news, I just couldn't imagine it initially; however, what I had to do was not hesitate but determine as soon as I could because procrastination might make the situation worsen.  Actually, I didn't face the truth at first, and even sought another way to cure my illness, which caused ghastly deterioration.  After all, I was so young that undergoing an operation was definitely dreadful.  However, at the prospect of operation, I wanted to flee, and yet, I started to think about it and accepted it ultimately, for my illness wouldn't improve if I kept evading.  As a result, I couldn't help but undergo a spinal surgery as I was a fifteen-year-old teenager.  During the seven days in the hospital, I felt extremely torturous as I couldn't sleep well; notwithstanding the terrible ache in my spine, I got it over.  After I was released from the hospital, I felt the unprecedented relief on thinking about what decision I had made which led to the improvement of my spinal disease.  From then on, I wouldn't have to worried about the terrible consequences of my uncommon illness.

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﹡可能不會的單字：
 ﹡scoliosis 脊椎側彎

Expressing an Opinion - 2

As collegians, people don't have to wear uniforms; instead, they wear whatever they are in favor of.  For my part, I think it is nice to wear a uniform due to several wherefores.  First, people who are in uniforms look neat and regulated.  Second, they are also the symbols of one's spirit and impression. Moreover, as they have an outing, it would be much more visible in a heavy crowd.  In addition, some uniforms are smashing since they are customized and ingenious.  In the long run, the practice of wearing a uniform is absolutely an excellent system without a doubt.

Expressing an Opinion - 1

In 1999, after a group of collegians in Northwestern University vindicated another student's innocence, the matter triggered the discussion over the death penalty in America.  Yet, I support that the penalty should exist for these reasons below.  First of all, since some people may consider it brutal to deprive a person of his life even though he might be a criminal, I hold that it serves him right; in my view, a convict should think of the consequence just before he does something illegal, and once he does it, he has to shoulder the penalty instead of shirking the punishment against laws protecting human rights.  Secondly, as long as the death penalty is abolished, the whole society must be in a state of chaos; those who commit crimes will never be afraid of the coming of the retribution.  Also, I am of the opinion that if the death sentence exists, the public will definitely live in peace and happiness without worrying about the misfortune's happening to them.  In light of all the points mentioned, it is undeniable that the existence of the death penalty is dominant to a certain extent.

Comparing - 2 - Revised

Compare the two dominant Americans, called John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, you can find they have something identical to each other's.  First of all, they both played an important role in American Revolution.  Secondly, John was a delegate to the Continental Congress and so was Thomas.  Also, they both involved in Declaration of Independence, and assumed the signer and of it.  Moreover, the twain who studied biography also studied and practiced law.  Most unbelievable of all, they even died on the same day, July 4, 1826.  In sum, these sagas above, which are absolutely worth emulating myself on, are definitely remarkable; undeniably, they are veritably sages.

Comparing - 1 - Revised

Every humanity has unique characteristics, and yet, the two people, called Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman, have the very familiar ones.  Firstly, I can see their eye color is the same and brown through the driver’s licenses.  Secondly, on them I can also gain the information that both of their hair is black.  Next, Stephanie is as tall as Ann; they are five feet and three inches tall.  To my surprise, even the date of their birthdays is identical, too.  In short, such instance as the twain might be seen somewhere across the globe; perhaps there are still some people who are similar to other ones everywhere; in the long run, the earth seems to be infinite after all.

Contrasting - 2

In an employer's shoes, choosing a person from the twain may be a bit difficult; yet, were I the boss, I might select Debra as my employee.  Firstly, Debra had education in BA English, a McGill university from 1993 to 1997, then a year later or so, she was in MA English, a university from Toronto; besides she studied in a college of Pennsylvania, PhD Linguistics, in 2000.  On the other hand, Lynn had education in BA Spanish, which is a New York university; that is, Debra has more education than Lynn.  Secondly, now I need an English instructor; hence, the one I hire must own some kind of experience, since Debra had been an instructor on Intensive English Program in a university of Vermont just like Lynn, who had been an English instructor in Tokyo Girls High School, Debra had more additional experience, such as a consultant and author, a teaching assistant, a server and whatnot.  Though Lynn had won Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, Debra had delivered plenty of public prints.  With these wherefores above, I am of the opinion that Debra is going to become one of my personnel undeniably.

Contrasting - 1

As a common student, I must have the ability to tell which apartment is better; consequently, I am about to contrast the two ones, Fairfax Apartments and CAMPUS APTS.  Firstly, Fairfax Apartments provides two bedrooms apt. whereas CAMPUS APTS has one bedroom apt. and yet, I'm of the opinion that I may need one bedroom since I am just about to live alone.  Besides, the room CAMPUS APTS has is available immediately in large modern building.  Secondly, pets are not accepted in Fairfax Apartments; on the contrary, CAMPUS APTS is pet-allowed; hence, if I had a pet, CAMPUS APTS might be the best choice for me; yet, I don't have a pet, so the difference may not have an impact on me.  Moreover, different from Fairfax Apartments, CAMPUS APTS is unfurnished, which may make it more time-consuming to arrange the furniture.  Also, people always most concerned about the prices they have, and I'm no exception; the way Fairfax Apartments charges is available on Sept. 1, $1250 per month; on the other hand, the way CAMPUS APTS does is only $900 per month plus utilities.  However, as a pupil, I think it shouldn’t be a nuisance to arrange my furniture just because I can save more money per month; in the long run, with these comparisons between the twain, I deem that CAMPUS APTS is my best choice.

Comparing - 3

I initially confused my Chinese teacher, Selena, in senior high school with my math teacher, Mickey, who taught me as I was just a pupil in junior high school in my cram school.  Plenty of resemblances to the twain will be presented now so that you will know why I used to regard them as the very identical ones.   First of all, they were both smashing; their excellent exteriors attracted me at first sight.  Secondly, Selena taught me so hard that she replenished what was not in the textbook, and likewise, Mickey did the same thing; she always provided me hordes of extra handouts to practice so that my math would improve after I did them.  Also, Mickey always spoke in a soft accent, which was similar to Selena did; having their courses was just like basking myself in a classical music concert.  Moreover, the mien Selena had was imperishable; hence, all scholars not only in my class but in other classes showed respect to her.  Yet, Mickey also had the same one so the students in the cram school like her so much.  In a word, the similarities they had were so wondrous, and it shouldn't be a surprise that I used to confuse them oftentimes.

Giving Reasons - Revised

Cynth, an excellent novelist from Taichung, launched her first novel composed of one hundred thousand words or so as she was a senior high school student, and became my favorite writer at the moment I read her masterpiece.  Undeniably, she was so outstanding that I could not help admiring her.  Actually, if I could have an opportunity to interview her, I would ask her something about the writing skills and the amazing achievement.  First of all, I’d ask her how she could have the perseverance to spend almost six years only to write a book.  Next, I wondered how a senior high school student could write so well and the sentences were extremely fascinating.  For I was also a Chinese novelist, I was eager to know methods to improve my writing techniques since she was definitely a perfect paragon what I could emulate myself to.  After the interview, I might take pictures with her and set them on my desk; hence, whenever I wrote, I would recall her so that I could regain stamina and persevered.  Yet, she devoted herself to Cynthiaism, which originally meant the goddess, Diana, in Rome and a bard, called Propertius, often named the main characters in love poets Cynthia; in sum, I was convinced that I would absolutely be more romantic in writing after the interview.

Describing a Person - Revised

About three days ago, I went to Kaohsiung with my friend, called Julie, and unfortunately, she got lost as I was purchasing my dinner in the night market.  What's worse, she didn't own a cell phone, which made it much more difficult for me to look for her.  Hence, some directions are about to be presented now in order to find her.  Firstly, I can tell you that she was one hundred and sixty centimeters tall or so, and she had long black hair reaching her waist; yet, she preferred to wear her hair in a ponytail.  Also, she wore a pair of spectacles whose frames are light yellow.  Moreover, the fantastic dress whose placket was interlaced to the slate gray and the ivory was what she was dressed in that day and she wore a pair of black beige boots.  I remember that she had a lavender bag on the shoulder; there were some animation patterns on it.  If anyone sees a person who matches the information above, please inform me by the e-mail as soon as possible.  Thanks a lot.

How to Reduce Stress - Revised

As senior high school students, it is inevitable to be under great pressure; hence, you should do something to release it.  First of all, preview what you will learn in class the next day so that it will be much easier for you to understand what the teacher says.  Secondly, review what you have learned today and practice as much as possible.  These two tips are the basic requirements to reduce stress, for procrastinating will do nothing but put more nasty pressure on you.  Yet, it'll be boring if your lives are filled with study; as a consequence, you need some recreation to relieve yourselves as well.  For instance, listen to the music as you are taking a rest in bed and try to let all the torments slip your mind; it will absolutely make you relaxed.  Also, do some exercise whenever you feel tired; it will do you good and is a great way to reduce stress, too.  As long as you conform to these easy but useful tips, I hold that you will definitely be an expert in releasing pressure; after all, "do the right thing at the right time" is the best policy.

Comparing - 2

Comparing the two dominant Americans, called Jolin Adams and Thomas Jefferson, you can find something identical to them.  First of all, they both played an important role in American Revolution.  Secondly, Jolin was a delegate to the Continental Congress and so was Thomas.  Also, they both involved in Declaration of Independence, and assumed the signer and the author of it.  Moreover, the twain who studied biography also studied and practiced law.  Most unbelievable of all, they even died on the same day, July 4, 1826.  In sum, these sagas above, which are absolutely worthy emulating myself on, are definitely remarkable; undeniably, they are veritably sages.

Comparing - 1

Every humanity has unique characteristics, and yet, the two people, called Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman, have the very familiar ones.  Firstly, I can see their eye color is the same and brown through the driver’s licenses.  Secondly, on it I can also gain the information about that both of their hair is black.  Next, Stephanie is as tall as Ann; they are five feet and three inches tall.  To my surprise, even the date of their birthdays is identical, too.  In short, such instance as the twain might be seen somewhere across the globe; perhaps there are still some people who are similar to other ones everywhere; in the long run, the earth seems to be infinite after all.

Giving Reasons

Cynth, an excellent novelist from Taichung, launched her first novel composed of one hundred thousand words or so as she was a senior high school student, and became my favorite writer on reading her master piece.  Undeniably, she was so outstanding that I could not help admiring her.  Actually, if I could have an opportunity to interview her, I would ask her something about the writing skills and the amazing achievement.  First of all, I’d ask her how she could have the perseverance to spend almost six years only to write a book.  Next, I wondered how a senior high school student could write so well and the sentences were extremely fascinating.  For I was also a Chinese novelist, I was eager to know methods to improve my writing techniques since she was definitely a perfect paragon what I could emulate myself.  After the interview, I might take pictures with her and set them on my desk; hence, whenever I wrote, I would recall her so that I could regain stamina and persevered.  Yet, she devoted herself to Cynthiaism, which originally meant the goddess, Diana, in Rome and a bard, called Propertius, often named the main characters in love poets Cynthia; in sum, I was convinced that I would absolutely be more romantic in writing after the interview.
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﹡以下是可能查不到或看不懂的翻譯：
　﹡Cynthiaism 欣西亞主義

Describing a Person

About three days ago, I went to Kaoshiung with my friend, called Julie, and unfortunately, she got lost as I was purchasing my dinner in the night market.  What's worse, she didn't own a cell phone, which made it much more difficult for me to look for her.  Hence, some directions are about to be presented now in order to find her.  Firstly, I can tell you that she is one hundred and sixty centimeters tall or so, and she has long black hair reaching her waist; yet, she prefered to wear her hair in a ponytail.  Also, she wore a pair of spectacles whose frames are lightyellow.  Moreover, the fantastic dress whose placket was interlaced to the slategray and the ivory was what she was dressed in that day and she wore a pair of black beige boots.  I remembered that she had a lavender bag on the shoulder; there are some animation patterns on it.  If anyone sees a person who matches the information above, please inform me by the e-mail as soon as possible.  Thanks a lot.

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﹡以下是一些顏色的翻譯：
lightyellow 淺黃色
slategray 石板灰色
ivory 象牙白
lavender 淡紫色(像薰衣草那種…)

How To Reduce Stress

Being senior high school students, it is inevitable to be under great pressure; hence, you should do something to release it.  First of all, preview what you will learn in class the next day so that it will be more easier for you to understand what the teacher says.  Secondly, review what you have learned today and practice as more as possible.  These two tips are the basic requirements to reduce stress, for procrastinating will do nothing but put more nasty pressure on you.  Yet, it'll be boring if your lives are filled with study; as a consequence, you need some recreation to relieve yourselves as well.  For instance, listen to the music as you are taking a rest in bed and try to let all the torments slip your mind; it will absolutely make you relaxed.  Also, do some exercise whenever you feel tired; it will do you good and is a great way to reduce stress, too.  As long as you conform to these easy but useful tips, I hold that you will definitely be an expert in releasing pressure; after all, "do the right thing at the right time" is the best policy.

Explaining a Process-3

If you want to get from the Visitor Center to the Free Quaker Meeting House, just obey these directions.  First, go north two blocks on Third Street from the Center.  Then turn left on Arch Street and go straight for two blocks; turn left again on Eifth Street.  You will find that the Free Quaker Meeting House is on your right.

Explaining a Process-2

There are plenty of experiments to show that black is a better collecter of solar energy than white, and here is one of them to be presented to you.  All you need are two cans, a black and white paint and a room thermometer.  To begin with, paint the cans-one black, one white.  Next, fill the cans with water.  After that, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours, and finally, remember to check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare.  You will see the result of the experiment is that the temperature of the water in the black can is higher.

Explaining a Process-1

It is easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure.  First of all, cover the bottom of pot with small stones.  Then, add soil until it almost reaches the top of the pot and after that, make a hole in the center of soil.  As the hole is made in an appropriate shape, drop plant into the soil.  Next, put two inches of soil on top of rocks to make the plant and the soil much closer.  Also, don't forget to press the soil down with thumbs.  In the long run, water the plant to keep it from dehydrating.  As long as you abide by these steps, it won't be too difficult for you to take good care of your plant.

A Good Memory That Will Last Forever-Revised1

On a Saturday morning, a genial sunbeam brightened my hair as well as my black patent leather bag to vividness; I thought it would certainly be a nice day for me.  As I was rambling around the railway station to wait for my cousin, I met an old lady, whose hair was a little messy, peddling tissue paper along the street in a hoarse voice.  However, plenty of people passed by the granny, but no one intended to stop.  I watched all the comings and goings.  Afterward, I stayed beside her; she looked at me appreciatively.  After a few talks, I knew that she had lived alone for several years, and she had to support herself even though the painstaking livelihood had tortured her for long.  Hence, I decided to buy all the tissue paper she sold, and wanted her to return home for a rest.  To my surprise, she smiled broadly at me, and she said that I was such a nice person who was willing to help an old lady.  On seeing her satisfaction expressed on her face, I was infatuated in the sparkling smile.  At that moment, I realized the essence of unforgettable memory lay in achieving the real happiness of the inner life.

A Good Memory That Will Last Forever

On a Saturday morning, a genial sunbeam brightened my hair as well as my black patent leather bag to vividness; I thought it would certainly be a nice day for me.  As I was rambling around the railway station to wait for my cousin, I met an old lady, whose hair was a little messy, peddled tissue paper alone the street in a hoarse voice.  However, plenty of people passed by the granny, but no one intended to stop.  I watched all the comings and goings.  Afterward, I stayed beside her; she looked at me appreciatively.  After a few talks, I knew that she had lived alone for several years, and she had to support herself even though the painstaking livelihood had tortured her for long.  Hence, I decided to buy all the tissue paper her sold, and wanted her to return home for a rest.  To my surprise, she smiled broadly at me, and she said that I was such a nice person who was willing to help an old lady.  On seeing her satisfaction expressed on her face, I was infatuated in the sparkling smile.  At that moment, I realized the essence of unforgettable memory lies in achieving the real happiness of the inner life.

A Dream I Have Had-Revised1

There was a mission bell; I didn't know neither where I was nor that I was dreaming due to the darkness.  I gradually saw the light appearing, and I was at my junior high school with nobody there.  "What's going on?"  I wondered.  It was already over nine o'clock in the morning but there was no one here.  I felt a bit startled for the creepy situation.  Fortunately, I saw my best friend coming to me with her hands shaking and greeting me.  Then, a shadow rapidly passed through like the wind, and we perceived somebody peeping at us.  All of a sudden, a bloody beast appeared with its stale smell disgusting me, and a shimmering light could be found on its forehead.  At the very moment, the frightening monster rushed to my friend and tore her into pieces; I dreaded the scarlet scene.  Yet, I told myself that I had to live; afterward, I accidentally became an exorcist and defeated it.  After the tough fight, I won, but I looked at my best friend's cell phone which was lying on the ground in desperation.  Unconsciously, my head grew heavy and my sight grew dimmer.  Before long, I woke up finding myself lying in bed with my body covered with beads of sweat.  I knew I had just a nightmare dream, but I seemed to sniff a slight scent of blood.

A Dream I Have Had

There was a mission bell; I didn't know neither where I was nor that I was dreaming due to the darkness.  I gradually saw the light appearing, and I was at my junior high school with nobody there.  "What's going on?"  I wondered.  It was already over nine o'clock in the morning but there was no one here.  I felt a little bit startled for the creepy situation.  Fortunately, I saw my best friend coming to me with her hands shaking and greeting me.  Then, a shadow rapidly passed through like the wind, and we perceived somebody peeping at us.  All of a sudden, a bloody beast appeared with its stale smell disgusting me, and a shimmering light could be found on its forehead.  At the very moment, the frightening monster rushed to my friend and tore her into pieces; I was very dreaded at the scarlet scene.  Yet, I told to myself that I had to live; afterward, I accidently became an exorcist and defeated it.  After the tough fight, I won, but I looked at my best friend's cell phone which was lying on the ground in desperation.  Unconsciously, my head grew heavy and my sight grew dimmer, before long, I woke up finding myself lying in bed with my body covered with beads of sweat.  I knew I had just a nightmare dream, but I seemed to sniff a slight smell of blood.